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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2020 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 3

I actually really like this concept. It's struck me recently that Jim really gets very little in the way of arcs about his growth over the course of the series in the way that Fancy New/Courage and Honesty Beesly does, and that in some ways that is tied to his feelings for Pam. Watching him try to grow and how Pam reacts to that is interesting.

Reviewer: fluffyfingers Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2009 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 3

Oh, please keep writing. I registered (after 2 years of reading on this site, mind you) just to beg you to keep writing. This is gonna be awesome. I can tell.

Reviewer: Jinxcoke Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2009 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 3

Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: Noodles Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2009 05:48 pm Title: Chapter 3

Hey I'm really enjoying this. Looking forward to the dinner chapter. I hope one of them takes a leap soon!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07, 2009 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 3

Hey, Makemesmile, nice to see you back so soon--and with TWO chaps.  You're building the tension quite nicely, and I'm looking forward to Jim and Pam's dinner date.

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