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Reviewer: NanReg Signed 
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Date: January 28, 2009 07:07 am Title: Chapter 5
9 [Report This]Date: January 28, 2009 07:07 am Title: Chapter 5
Whew! ::NanReg lets out a breath she didn't know she was holding:: Good, good chap, Makemesmile. I AM salivating! This little dance they're doing is exhausting (in a good way). Please, oh please don't wait so long to update. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat...
Reviewer: albie_ Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2009 07:00 am Title: Chapter 5
10 [Report This]Date: January 28, 2009 07:00 am Title: Chapter 5
I just read the last 5 chapters and I'm really enjoying myself. This stream ofconsciousness style is really working well here and you have a lovely handle on the dialogue and banter between the two. This last chapter was a lot of fun, them using The Princess Bride to bide time. I look forward to more!