Date: July 20, 2009 04:48 am Title: Icy Roads
Sad, yet ultimately uplifting....and so heartfelt! Nice job!
Date: July 18, 2009 09:30 pm Title: Icy Roads
All these poems are sooo good! So sad, but good! Great writing!
10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2009 05:16 pm Title: Icy Roads
Wow. This chapter was truly amazing. I love how this:
Whenever we were driving
and had to slow down
because there was an accident
on the side of the road
he would get all concerned.
leads into this:
The cars that drove by
looked so sad
and so concerned.
Really amazing work! (although I'm glad Jim is still alive on the show! haha)
8 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2009 03:00 pm Title: Icy Roads
This is my favorite so far. I was wondering what happened to Jim, and then to actually read it brought tears to my eyes. I especially like how seeing an accident could ruin Jim's evening because he was so sad - and their accident ruined a lifetime. I really like the last line.
10 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2009 08:57 pm Title: Icy Roads
So sad. But the story starts to unravel. Another great chapter, and looking forward to more :)
Author's Response: Jim dying is sometimes too sad for me to handle. But writing it makes me want to write more! I'm glad you liked this chapter, and I hope the ones to come hold up. Thanks for reviewing my little story!
Date: February 13, 2009 08:26 pm Title: Icy Roads
These are so sad! Wonderful memories of Jim from Pam's point of view.
Author's Response: For some reason I love the sadness.... I don't know what that says about me as a person. But the whole Pam's POV thing just makes it more sad. I'm glad you like them, and thank you so much for the review!