Reviews For New York Pam
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Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2009 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 2

I'd still love to read the rest of NY Pam's story, if you have it in you to share...

Reviewer: Kate6058 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19, 2009 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 2

Echoing EarlyWorm's sentiments about this line:

What about a girl who could be invisible in a crowd but never feel completely lonely because of the vibration of peoples’ dreams and stories and lives around?

This is what draws me to city living as well. As much as it hurts to read this piece, it's impossible to ignore the reality of what very well could have been Pam's situation while living in New York. Once she found her own voice... sigh.

The lyrics you posted are perfect as well. I can't wait for the next update. Well done.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12, 2009 06:15 am Title: Chapter 2

Oh, it's hurting my heart, and I'm liking it.  What does that say about me?!  Another strong chap, wen.  Thanks for including the song lyrics.  I enjoy nifty gifties :) 

Reviewer: EarlyWorm Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2009 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wow, again you're taking thoughts right out of my brain.

[i]What about a girl who could be invisible in a crowd but never feel completely lonely because of the vibration of peoples’ dreams and stories and lives around?[/i]

That's why I love living in a city.

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11, 2009 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 2

Wendolf,

I love Pam's perspective here.  There really was so much of life she'd never gotten to experience and might well want to.

As for the links ... I open an IE window and actually go to the web page.  Copy the URL from the address bar and paste it in the notes.  It comes in underlined like a link and works fine.

I was going to insert one to show you, but the sites you listed are blocked here.

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