Date: June 14, 2009 03:52 pm Title: I've made up my mind. No need to think it over.
Keep it going! I like the three different views on everything.
Author's Response: Thanks! It is tricky writing that way, but I like the effect of it too!
10 [Report This]Date: June 14, 2009 03:14 pm Title: I've made up my mind. No need to think it over.
Ah... unrequited love, really liking this scenario. Great job, looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I am about to add second chapter!
Date: June 14, 2009 03:09 pm Title: I've made up my mind. No need to think it over.
Though this was a fantastic one-shot, I would love to read more about a possible Pam/Karen friendship from (pretty much) the beginning. And I love the friendship/love triangle thing that's going on. This is DEFINITELY worthy of continuing, and I hope you do!
Author's Response: Ah thanks, makes me so happy that you are enjoying it! I do really like it as a one shot and I am kinda frightened of touching it incase it makes it worse, but I feel there is more to explore and I have an idea for the second chapter, so going to carry on with it! I do think Pam/Karen could quite easily have been friends in S3 if the whole love triangle hadn't got in the way.
10 [Report This]Date: June 14, 2009 01:26 pm Title: I've made up my mind. No need to think it over.
Oh, please continue this! Such an interseting idea. Turning the love-triangle into a love-square lol. Looking forward to more (hopefully!).
And one thing- There`s a typo in the Jim section: `He was already in love with him by the time she told him about her fiancé.`
Again, can`t wait to see where you take this :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Hoping to add 2nd second chapter today!rnCheers for the typo!