8 [Report This]Date: July 09, 2009 12:01 pm Title: I, Jim, take you, guilt, to be my new companion
Okay that was incredible chapter,but I thought it was going to have a Jim-protesting-and-wedding-not-happening ending. (Jim feels guilty over ruining Pam's wedding thing) This story is kind of like watching "The Office". You don't know where it's going, but you trust the writers will have it turn out well. Please send the next chapter along quickly!
Author's Response: Thank you! I actually thought that is how it would work, but that's not very realistic! I seriously doubt that Pam would end her wedding, right in the middle, for him, let alone anyone, especially after years of planning. This being said, I wanted to give it another twist, which you will find out about shortly. I'm working on chapter 4 now, and there will be at least one more chapter after, probably two. Thanks again for the lovely comment!
Author's Response: Thank you! I actually thought that is how it would work, but that's not very realistic! I seriously doubt that Pam would end her wedding, right in the middle, for him, let alone anyone, especially after years of planning. This being said, I wanted to give it another twist, which you will find out about shortly. I'm working on chapter 4 now, and there will be at least one more chapter after, probably two. Thanks again for the lovely comment!
Date: July 07, 2009 09:37 pm Title: I, Jim, take you, guilt, to be my new companion
I hate to say it, but THAT would have made excellent TV. Too bad TO's not a drama because I'm sure JKras could have pulled this off--Oh God, how heart wrenching!! Can’t wait to see what else you have planned.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I feel EXACTLY the same way! That's why I'm writing it, because I can see JKras (love the nickname, by the way) playing it sooo well! rnThank you so much! Stay tuned!
Date: July 07, 2009 09:20 pm Title: I, Jim, take you, guilt, to be my new companion
Wow that was really painful to read - not because it was badly written (quite the opposite) but because Jim's pain was so intense I could really feel it. I kept expecting something to happen like she'd change her mind and my heart is so crushed that she didn't. Really painful stuff in a really good way. You captured his heartache perfectly. Sniff.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I almost had him do something, like jump up and say her name, or walk out, or something dramatic, but I just couldn't because Jim's too much of a good friend to do that to her. But you just wait - the ending will be allll redemption! Once again, thank you so, so much for the lovely comment!