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Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2009 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great start to what I'm sure will be a great adventure between them.

Author's Response: Thanks.  I hope you continue to enjoy it.

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2009 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 2

Can't wait to see what starts happening in an hour. Great job.

Author's Response: Thanks.  There's plenty yet to come.

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2009 06:29 am Title: Chapter 6

I LOVE this story!  I like the slow-building burn you are creating between the two of them.

I'm adding this to my favourites and I can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Thanks so much.  I'm so happy you're enjoying it.  And yes, with these two...it is probably going to take some time to figure things out.  So, stay tuned.

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2009 05:30 am Title: Chapter 6

Whoa, Pam's getting naughty and the snow is still falling. I really liked this description: "She just did something to him...just as she had from the very beginning."

Author's Response: Well...I did say things might get a bit steamy in the end...but it's gotta build slowly.  Maybe being in the car alone with Jim just might be making Ms. Beesly think lots of thoughts...hmmmm!  Or, at least starting to.  And as far as Jim goes...yeah, there's just somethin' about that woman.

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2009 05:10 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh Yes, Mr. Bill! (sorry, I had to say that) Seriously, this is very well written and I love the idea you are setting up so nicely - take the silly, noncommunicating ones and put them in a car together for hours in snowstorm? Awesome. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapters.

Author's Response: Thanks for the chuckle.  I've always liked the idea of "road trip" stories...taking the protagonists out of their normal element and letting unfamiliar circumstances lead to awkward and sometimes "eye opeining" situations.  We'll just have to see how Jim and Pam handle things.

Reviewer: SkeetShruting Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2009 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

I am loving this story!! Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Thanks...there's still a lot to come.

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2009 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really like this idea.  Now that we are so far past the angst of season3 I love reading about it.  I'm excited to see where this one goes.



Author's Response: I just liked the idea of putting Jim and Pam into a situation where they're more or less forced to deal with each other...as much as they'd like to keep trying to avoid certain things.

Reviewer: I_Still_Believe Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2009 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 3

This is great so far! You've really captured the season 3 Jim/Pam dynamic well. Looking forward to seeing where you take this!

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words.  Yes, the missed opportunities in Season 3...so frustrating.  Maybe  a good snow storm will help!

Reviewer: ilovetoJAM Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2009 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 3

yay. more please =]

Author's Response: Don't worry, there's plenty more to come.  Glad you're enjoying it so far.

Reviewer: simplicity Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2009 11:48 am Title: Chapter 1

I really like this story so far, and I'm interested in seeing where it goes. Great job, keep it up! :-D

Author's Response: Thank you...glad you like it. 

Reviewer: bkwrm Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07, 2009 09:18 am Title: Chapter 3

This is a very interesting premise. I wonder if Michael chose Pam to go with Jim on purpose? Your description of how different their "friendship" has become since Jim's return was very accurate. I also like the way you wrote the glimpses into their inner thoughts, especially Jim not feeling right with Karen.

Although I know that they're in a happy place right now after Season 5, reading this really made me want to shake both of them, Jim more so than Pam.

I'm looking forward to what's going to happen during the car ride and later, at the seminar. Also, I think it's great that you finished this story because yay!, I don't have to wait long for the next update :o) Oh yeah, is the answer to your title, "Both have miserable weather?" Can't wait until the next installment!

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it.  And you're right about both of them needing a good shake at this point.  As for your other questions, you'll just have to keep reading.

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