Date: July 14, 2009 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 22
My God, these two drive me crazy. I hope they discontinue the "dance" sometime soon!
Author's Response: Yeah crazy...but it's still kind of fun, right? Sort of like a car crash and you want t look away but you just can't. I hope you stick with this.
Date: July 14, 2009 08:29 am Title: Chapter 22
OMG...these two make me want to pull my hair out! While I understand their reticence, they need to talk already (or get down to the good stuff!). This reminds me so much of season 3 so good job on keeping up the suspense & tension. Now I need to go watch Company Picnic.
Regarding Frida & the actress she's based on, can I have a clue? I like old movies but can't always remember names.
Also, I think I know the answer to your title. I've been to Paris in April and one word comes to mind (besides rain).
Author's Response:
Bkwrm....please give them a chance....it's only been less than a day since they started this trip (well, the trip to Albany). Who knows what this new day may bring?
Regarding Frida...I'll give you a clue....the movie in which the actress appeared and that provided the inspiration for the character of Frida was recently remade and had its theatrical release in 2008. Both films were noteworthy for a particular aspect of its casting. Does that help?
As far as the answer to the "Title" question...I'll trust you to let me know after my final posting. And, yes...it wasn't "rain"!
Date: July 14, 2009 07:43 am Title: Chapter 22
I can't tell you haow much I look forward to your updates. Even if you are trying to kill me! These two are so frustrating. Thanks for painting such a perfect picture of what they are both feeling.
Author's Response: Well, think of the bright side...at least the snow has stopped! Glad you're enjoying it.
Date: July 14, 2009 06:34 am Title: Chapter 22
I'm torn between being happy this story is still going on, and wanting to step into the story and unleash a big 20 oz can of Whoopass on both of them.
Author's Response: Sounds like the story's got your dander up a bit. That's a good thing, right?
Date: July 14, 2009 06:32 am Title: Chapter 19
OMG, you big meanie. Here I thought they'd finally get er...talking. I loved the way you wrote the wrestling scene - playful then serious. But Jim need to grow a pair. It's Booze Cruise all over again.
Author's Response: What can I say....it's Jim and Pam and you know...things are complicated!
Date: July 14, 2009 06:32 am Title: Chapter 22
This angst is killing me--but in a good way. You certainly weren't kidding when you said they had a ways to go. I like having this to look forward to. You're doing a great job, Bill.
Author's Response: No, I wasn't! But please keep reading...this isn't the end of the story.
Date: July 14, 2009 06:21 am Title: Chapter 20
Ouch. So frustrating. Wish I could shake these two. This is when thoughts of baby to be come in handy.
Author's Response: Yeah, there is a certain luxury and comfort level in being able to look back at these "dark" days from where things are now.
Date: July 14, 2009 06:15 am Title: Chapter 19
Helloooo, Tuesday, and helloooo, playful wrestling with morning wood! Holy smokes! This chap has a certain breathlessness about it, such great pacing.
6 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2009 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wasn't I the lucky one to see new chapters tonight! Now I can go to sleep happy.
I love the way her kiss was described. It was so intimate and I can just picture them on the bed, trying to figure out what was really going on in each other's head. Poor Jim, she messed with his mind so much, he doesn't know what to think.
I love where this is going. I am patiently awaiting the next update!
Author's Response: Yeah...I think there's a whole lotta confusion goin' on right now...on both sides of that mattress.
9 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2009 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 18
Hot damn.
It's about to get good.
Author's Response: Even I'm getting antsy! Thanks for checking in.
Date: July 13, 2009 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 18
Oooh...you're so cold! Leaving us (and Jim) hanging like that! The possibilities of the next update ::rub hands in anticipation::
Okay, on to the more coherent review: I enjoyed the awkwardness of the two of them trying to get comfortable in the same bed. And I like how Pam is in this story. Honest and straightforward. What else...oh yeah, the two of them talking together in bed. They should get all the talking done so we can get to the good part, if ya know what I mean ;o) Kidding! But not really.
Author's Response: As I've been saying...patience, patience...patience. And, I don't think it's any surprise that I think Pam is one of the most intriguing characters on televison. I'm not going to belabor the point here, but she's been on quite the journey since we frst met her sort of squirming at Michael's remarks from behind the reception desk in the "Pilot".
Date: July 13, 2009 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 15
I gotta say, I freaking love Frida since she pretty much said everything I thought about Jim during S3 ("So...you're an asshole, too)! They both need someone to give them a swift kick on their behinds ;o) I love so much the fact that Jim made an effort to introduce Pam to his family but never extend the same courtesy to Karen. It's mean of me but oh well.
Of course, the details about Jim's family are always appreciated. And I can't help but melt at when Jim just sat there and watched Pam drew. As a reader, I can feel how much he missed being part of her life.
Another great update! Now, off I go to the next three chapters!
Author's Response: I really enjoyed thinking about Frida and who she was and what she was like. And to be honest, in the end I pretty much fashioned her after a fairly well-known character actress from the 30's and 40's...and from a particulalr movie as well...any guesses?
Date: July 13, 2009 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 18
Geez, how am I supposed to wait after that ending?! Boner patrol!/Michael Scott
Author's Response: Maybe you can borrow one of Stanley's crossword puzzle books to kill some time. Remember, patience is a virtue. And Skeet (may I call you "Skeet"?) serious props to you for giving my story a nice plug in the "Recommendations" thread. It's greatly appreciated and I'm so glad that you are enjoying this tale, thus far.
Date: July 13, 2009 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 12
Awww...even strangers could tell that they're meant to be together! Why can't they? I'm glad to read about the inner monologues of both of them. If only there was a way that they can read each other mind, then things would be so much simpler!
My favorite thing about this story so far is the fact that Jim and Pam haven't even kissed each other yet but the way you described them looking at each other is just so good. It's the same way they surreptitiously looked at each other in the first 3 seasons. Loved it!
Can't wait to have some more free time to read the rest!
Author's Response: Free up some spare time...there's lots more coming.
Date: July 13, 2009 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 9
Ha! How did I guessed it? Jim and Pam getting stuck at a roadside motel? I'm liking the fact that they have to share a room. I also really like how you're drawing out the tension between the two of them and that they're not jumping into bed right away (not that I'd mind, per se ;o)
The last sentence of chapter 9 is just so beautifully written. It's exactly what I've always thought Jim must have felt when he moved away.
Author's Response: bkwrm...you're too crafty for me. 50 Schrute Bucks to you! And, you're right...up 'til now I think they've been feeling really, really cautious about each other. It does keep the tension up. Thanks for sticking with me.
Date: July 13, 2009 08:44 am Title: Chapter 18
Dude, are you kidding me?! ...Jim's erection. "Oh my!" Forget lions and tigers and bears. You are such a tease. Other than that...um...I liked this latest trio of chaps. A lot. And now you're going to keep me hanging until tomorrow, thoughts of Jim's treasure trail hijacking my every thought. *grumble grumble*
Author's Response: Yeah...I'm bad! But hey...there's still a long, long way to go....gotta keep it interesting. And in all seriousness, a special thanks to you (and skeetschruting as well) for the nice words in the "Recommendations" thread. I do appreciate it.
Date: July 13, 2009 05:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my. Those last few paragraphs really kicked things up a notch! Wow. I can't wait for Jim's reaction to Pam's "Oh my!" :-)
I also loved the nod to Beach Games and the uncertainty of whether they had gone back to being friends or were on the road to being "more than that".
Again, this story is so well thought out and such a pleasure to read. Kudos.
Author's Response: Well, thank you very much. In some ways, they communicate so naturally...except, of course when they think too much about it. But, that's sort of what we humans do so often...don't we? I think things are very ambiguous, just at the moment...stay tuned.
Date: July 13, 2009 04:57 am Title: Chapter 16
I could picture Jim trying to figure out a way to get comforable in that chair, twisting and turning and forgetting his pillow, etc. Nice metaphor/parallel for the discomfort he's feeling with the whole situation.
Author's Response: You sound like me when I was trying to write that part...I actually got into a straight back chair and wriggled around for awhile. And yes, I think Jim had a lot more on his mind in that situation than just the chair. Thanks so much for your interest.
Date: July 13, 2009 04:54 am Title: Chapter 18
Well, good morning, Jim Halpert. Bwahahaha. Now that's a cliffhanger ending for sure.
Seriously though, I loved the way you described Jim waking up and realizing Pam was curled up around him. Nicely done.
I don't see any way for them to avoid talking about what they need to talk about now - anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and stay tuned...with these two, you never know.
Date: July 13, 2009 03:47 am Title: Chapter 18
I am quite literally vacationing halfway around the world and I can't help myself from checking every day for new chapters. This is like torture getting a few chapters at a time...but great knowing that there will be a few more chapters waiting there tomorrow! Thanks for such a great story!
Author's Response: Go out...see the sites...breathe in some clear fresh air. I'm honored that you actually take time out while vacationing to check in on this story. Thank you. And, just where is "halfway around he world"? Hope you're having fun.
6 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2009 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm still addicted! I love the tension that's been building, and Pam drawing the couple in the corner. The inner monologue is great, because they both want to the exact same thing and no one wants to give and be the one to finally bring it up. Thank you for being so prompt in updating, because I just live for the times when I see this story updated! I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: I'm gald that you and others are enjoying the "inner dialogue" stuff. As has been said by so many about Jim and Pam....so often it's more about what they don't say...especially during this particular period in their story.
10 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2009 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 15
I adore this story so much, but what I love even more are the quick updates! I can't wait to see how this talk turns out, so make sure not to leave us in suspense for too long ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it. More coming soon!
Date: July 11, 2009 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 15
Mr Bill, thanks for helping me pass the time tonight. Still along for the ride and still thoroughly enjoying how this story is playing out. I'm even enjoying the slow pace. Also, I truly appreciate the regular updates!
Author's Response: You're welcome. And remember, this still has quite a ways to go yet. I hope you and everyone else will remain patient.
Date: July 11, 2009 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 11
Snow storm? Check. One room? Check. Liquor? Big ole check. Things just keep getting better :)
Author's Response: You forgot...one big "bed"! But, hey...maybe that won't even come into play? I guess you'll just have to wait and see.
Date: July 11, 2009 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 10
Happy, happy Saturday! Knew you wouldn't let me down, Bill. I'm a happy girl :) You are so nicely building the tension in this fic, and you've created such a cozy atmosphere with such appealing characters.
Author's Response: Thanks. Cozy, huh? I hadn't really thought about it that way....but that's good, too.