Date: September 12, 2009 08:18 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm not totally sure he'd go back toKaren quite likethat... i thinkhe'd go back and break it to her gently, but I loved this story because I could see this happening, and man, it would have made PW such a better episdoe!
8 [Report This]Date: August 05, 2009 04:15 am Title: Chapter 1
It's cool how this story sounds like it could actually have happened. Except I'm not sure Jim would have really gone back to Karen for even a second after Pam said she loved him:) But all in all a great story!
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2009 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
She looked into his eyes as deeply as she could from far away, and when he nodded ever so slightly, she knew he’d gotten her message.
This gives me hope. I loved this story. I loved the tone, the dialogue, the hope, the emotion.
“I’ll never love her the way I love you. Not even close.”
This made me cry. This is a beautiful piece of work. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your feedback! I'm so glad I got across the right message with the story- since it was my first time writing these characters, I wanted it to be perfect! I'm SO glad you enjoyed it, thank you for reading!
9 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2009 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
So, so adorable.
“I hope she makes you happy, Jim, because you deserve that. You deserve to be happy."
and
“I realized that I didn’t have a reason to wake up in the morning until I met you, Jim. You…you’re everything.”
So realistic and remorseful and perfect for this.
I really hope you are considering writing more!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I definitely want to write more with them, so hopefully some more oneshots will be coming your way soon. :)