Date: August 02, 2009 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 1 ill wind
sure, not much happened, but you nailed all the inner thinking! oh my goodness, that was so realistic and accurate, i'm beyond impressed! i trust that you'll have more plot in the next chapter, but you set up everything so well. great details - i'm so lucky to get to read another chapter, without waiting!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I always love to hear when people think I've managed to hit the characters (or when I haven't for that matter...). I appreciate your taking the time to review.
Date: August 02, 2009 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 2 Staple it Together and Call It Bad Weather
This sounds promising-- I love an inventive backstory. And Jim with power tools (ideally with his shirt off ;o)
Author's Response: I'm glad you're interested Ms. Hoo. I have to tell you in advance that Jim uses power tools and Jim takes his shirt off, but not at the same time. I hope that doesn't stop you from reading... *grin* Thanks for the read and review.