Date: June 16, 2010 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is lovely, Steph. I really enjoy your Tobycentric stories, and this was wonderful. Even Toby deserves a little happy, right?
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. But in my opinion Toby deserves a lot of happy.
Date: June 14, 2010 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. That was very interesting. I like your Sasha a lot. She's a very well rounded character. Somehow I missed the other part of this series. I'll have to go back now and read it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I like writing Sasha. Yes, please do read the other fics, it'll put this one much more in context. I hope you enjoy those as well.
Date: June 14, 2010 10:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic job, Steph. You brought Sasha to life, and Toby, too, for that matter. I'm impressed with the little things that give this story such depth and heart--your descriptions of Kelly's wardrobe, her little gifts for Sasha, Ari's adoration of her older sister. I think my favorite part was Toby calling Ari by names of food--really quirky and funny :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it. It was really fun writing Ariel.