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Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2007 07:33 am Title: Chapter 4

I believe a short review this chapter just because it made me giggle and smile.

Okay, just a few more things - this was such a sweet chapter.

And...
"Impossible. Do you have any idea how long I've waited for this moment?" He says with a grin.

She gives him a look and smiles back in spite of it all. "Umm. Three years?"

"No." He shakes his head at her. His mouth moves over hers as he whispers. "Try forever."

So sweet and one of the best chapter endings I have EVER read

Author's Response: Awwww.  Thank you!!! 

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2007 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 4

Again, great chapter.  I love Pam's internal dialogue here:

Stop running Pam. Aren't you tired? What would it be like if you just gave in? You could still get married, it just won't happen in three weeks. You could be happy. He'll make you happy. He'll take care of you. He'll make you laugh. You already know that. Be honest. FOR ONCE. You already know…

It's perfect. 

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