10 [Report This]Date: January 05, 2010 12:18 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow, this chapter was the best so far. By the way, I found this on the must-read fanfic list here at MTT -and it's there for a obvious reason! This is incredible! I love how Roy is changing so much in this chapter, trying to read Pam, and Pam is being herself, calm but sure of her intentions, softly stating her mind. I admire Jim for speaking his mind, but really, Jim? You're going to be that harsh and forward, even mean to the one you want to leave from her man of 10 YEARS? I thought Jim was kind of extreme, yet very realistic, so great job with that. Anyways, I'll read one more chapter, and then I'm off to bed. It's so late! Great job with this chapter, and story in general, I'm going to be so excited to come home to this after school tomorrow!
Date: June 09, 2007 07:42 am Title: Chapter 5
So, the conversation between Pam and Roy reminded me of a story my mom told me, and then as i wrote it all out, I couldn't figure out why it reminded me or what connections my brain made, so I didn't share.
But I think this was a very realistic breaking up the wedding scene. And it still sort of fits into the whole way Roy was acting in Season Three...
Author's Response: I think I captured Roy pretty well and what I imagined a discussion between the two of them would be like. Poor Roy. I hope he finds a nice girl.
Date: April 29, 2007 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
You did a great job of making the conversation realistic. Even if Roy is a thoughtless jerk, it's still going to be hard for Pam, because you don't spend 10 years with someone and not care about him. It was heart-wrenching to read, and I could imagine just what Pam was thinking: without Jim right in front of her, reminding her that he's the only one for her, it's easy to worry more about hurting Roy than about hurting herself.
Well, enough psychoanalysis, huh? Another great chapter.