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Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2007 11:36 am Title: Chapter 8

Best Greeting Ever: "You come here often?" He whispers, unable to keep the smile from crossing his face.
So totaly Jim!

And I love how understanding Jim is, even though he like, he is angry at her (well, as angry as he can be about her), and unsure, he is also a bit angry at himself, and totally understanding.

I wish I could have more do-overs.


Author's Response:

This might be my favorite scene ever.   Writing it was effortless - their voices were in my head so loud and clear the whole time.

And me too. :)

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2007 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 8

Okay, I'm starting to feel a little better now.  Oh, I'll stop playing it cool: YIPPEE!  Yay for Scheming!Pam!

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