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Reviewer: deerinthepark Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 04, 2008 12:52 am Title: Chapter 1

An old fic, but it's very cute, so I thought I'd comment.  Love the last little bit, especially-- so sweet!

Author's Response:

Thanks deer!  This is old - one of the very first I wrote - so it's lovely to have it recognized now.  So glad you liked it!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

I am going to place a wee bit of blame/thanks on you and this story. So, it was forever and a day ago (aka winter time I believe), that I read this story at FF.net, I guess. And I left a review. And you sent me an email (I believe this was before I could remember my login information there, and therefore, it was an anonymous review, just with an email address). And you told me about this site. So then I started visiting this site. And then somewhere shortly after it, fanfic went from being something I read occasionally to being a way of life. So, not sure if it is blame (because I used to have a life outside of the office and mtt), or thanks (because really, it is a fun life here).
But, when I rediscovered that email that you sent me, I just had to reread the story again.

It is so interesting to read this story (which I don't know when it was written, but apparently, unless my memory is totally flawed, it was at least before wintery time), and connect it with what has happened since then.

I love the angry Jim confrontation. Going along with what I just said, I can still believe that Pam doesn't connect that she is the common denominator between angry!Jim, and that the reason he gets angry is when she isn't going for it, she isn't taking a chance, she isn't being all she can be (slightly borrowing from the army - i think - with that last one)

With the wedding responses - you and roy perfect together - honestly, what are they going to say - you and roy are horrible together? Yeah, so two of my friends are engaged, and I have things I want to say to them (neither is quite like roy, its mostly - you've been dating 6 months and you are ENGAGED alreadY!!!!!)... but ya know what, there are some things you just keep quiet about. Unless you are Jim. and I don't mean that in a bad way. Its just Jim's reason for protesting was a different one that others would say. Am I making ANY sense at all... because really, I know what I am trying to say in my head, but trying to make it into words is just producing a lot of goobly gook.

Haha! Well, I guess this was written post-Runaway bride. Which is so funny, since it happened in Atlanta, and I am from Atlanta. And so, Atlanta references are fun. That woman was crazy though. An insane time.

Pam's bit of bravery for cancelling the wedding was very brave, but, she needed just a bit longer (okay way to much longer), until she could get up courage for beach games. Or maybe she just needed to wait for a good sweeps period. Haha.

Love that Jim thinks "stop calling her pammy" because of the whole "don't call me pammy"

Wow, yes, this was just great, and I can totally remember how it was great in the past.

Unfortionatly, my battery on my laptop is nearly dead, and so, I can't read this more until later once I get it charged more *sigh* battery life is dying. But, I am going to reread this again, just because I HAVE to.

Author's Response: Wow.  I'm so sorry (or thankful - not sure what you'd prefer. lol!) to have lured you here.  Thank you so much for your kind review and for rereading.  You rock!

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2007 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

I'm so glad you linked this story, because it's wonderful.  I'm so happy I have something awesome to read!

This was perfect (LOVE Jim being forceful):

"I'm not going to back off. I'm done with that. Sorry if it inconveniences you but I'm not going to just forget that when I kissed you - you kissed me back."



Author's Response: Awww.  I love that you're reading this now.  I wasn't even going to link it's so obsolete.  Glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: aurorabora Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2006 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

One of my favorite fics EVER. Glad you brought it over. :)

Author's Response: Awww. Thanks!! I'm so glad you like it.

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