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Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2007 07:19 am Title: Chapter 2

I like how Angela interfers even though she doesn't want to. It is very Angela.

""It's simple." His lips graze the top of her head as he whispers almost too low for her to hear. "Choose me.""
So, low sexy voice and choose me.... gah!

Haha, carrying Pam into the house sounds shockingly like what I do when i carry the 22 month old into the house. Its like, pray to god he doesn't wake up as I am unstrapping him from his stroller, I don't jostle him as we walk up the stairs, and try to get his shoes off (and if I feel confident - his diaper), and then get him into the crib.
However, after that is just a giant sigh of relief and a total exhaustion. Nothing at all sexy.


Author's Response:

This was written back when I hoped Jim would just get pissed off enough to not let her get away with it.  Or - what it'd be like if S3 never happened. :)

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2007 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 2

OMFG, I am dead.  Killed.  This?  Is freakin' awesome:

"It's simple." His lips graze the top of her head as he whispers almost too low for her to hear. "Choose me."



Author's Response:

I so wish that's what happened.

I was so optimistic in those days.  SIGH.

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