10 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2010 08:45 pm Title: the fight: so many romantic misunderstandings
Is it my birthday? Two Callisto stories so closely together!
What a wonderful little story! Gah. S2 and 3 angst, they are the gifts that keep on giving. So many tiny moments that are powerful, so many aspects to explore.
The pokey stick is away, yet close by. So keep up the stories that break our heart and makes us smile at the same time.
And yes, drunk Jim is adorable.
Date: September 15, 2010 08:13 pm Title: the fight: so many romantic misunderstandings
Guh, that crazy time when every look and tiny movement had such subtext.
Feel free to take us there anytime, callisto.
P.S. Slightly drunk Jim is adorable.
Date: September 15, 2010 07:28 pm Title: the fight: so many romantic misunderstandings
Lovely dialogue. Just the right balance of awkward and sincere mixed in with the implication of genuine affection. It was nice to revisit this chapter in their relationship although they still had a lot of ground to cover before finally becoming a couple. A lot of fertile ground, may I add, for an inspired author such as you! Yay for incurable Jam fanfic readers! Cannot wait to discover what else you have planned. Merci for Après.
Date: September 15, 2010 07:00 pm Title: the fight: so many romantic misunderstandings
Perfect! Not muchtime to write here but ... PERFECT! You captured Pam's ambivalence at that time so well, and conveyed the the thoughts she'd only let herself half have. Very nice!
10 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2010 06:54 pm Title: the fight: so many romantic misunderstandings
I know I'm probably supposed to say something more than 'awww!!' in a review, but that's the first thing I said after I finished reading this. :) I'm so glad they're together now, but just so much nostalgia. Really looking forward to more.