Date: March 20, 2011 09:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Sorry for the delay in reviewing this. I like this premise and look forward to Jim and Pam's story from this guys view.
Author's Response: Thank you! It'll be a little while before I have another update, but hopefully it won't disappoint when we get to the end.
Date: March 19, 2011 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting premise. I like your take on Len. Do you have your story arc worked out? Len could be a manipulative prick, a soft-hearted guy, an analytical guy... So many ways you can take this.
Author's Response: Thank you! I do have an arc planned out for this, though I haven't outlined it, I know what I want to happen and about where I'd like it to happen. And I do agree, there are many ways you can take him right now. I don't see Len as a one-dimensional person, and without giving too much away, I see room for some character development with him.
Date: March 19, 2011 07:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Normally I don't like when lines are lifted right out of the show but I did enjoy this, it's dofferent - I like your interpretation on how the camera crew got them to answer the questions. I forget that they used to be more closed off to the camera crew. Looking forward to seeing what you have in store next. I'd be happy to beta if you're interested/ feel like you need some advice. Djyankees@gmail.com. Either way I'll be looking forward to more of this.
Author's Response: Thank you! I may take you up on it as I go along.
8 [Report This]Date: March 19, 2011 07:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Clever idea-- I agree that they all seemed quite reserved in the beginning, and only gradually became less guarded around the cameras, until eventually Jim seems to look at them as a sort of confidante as things get more stressful. Should be interesting to see where you go with these.
One thing you might want to fix: I noticed that in your categories, you list 'Angela/Andy' as the characters. ??
Welcome to MTT! :)
Author's Response: Thank you the warm welcome and for for catching that; hadn't realized I'd clicked it!