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Reviewer: MaryESP Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2021 07:46 pm Title: Four years later...

I love this! You really capture their dynamic d84;a039;d84;a039;

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2011 06:29 am Title: Four years later...

Yeah, loved reading a future story with a happy normal family. It's never easy for a dad to realize his daugher is growing up and you hit it spot on for Jim. Loved how Pam was able to reasure him. So happy to see how very much in love they still are.:)

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2011 04:36 am Title: Four years later...

I'm still here!  How wonderful to see an update to this more_awake.  Loved it, of course.  Protective daddy Jim is especially hard to resist.  Very cute ending.  I love that Jim and Pam are still crazy for each other.  Nice way to turn the tables on Cece, especially since it didn't seem forced. 

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 14, 2011 03:36 am Title: Four years later...

You are so welcome! I really enjoyed helping you with this! You definitely hit the nail on the head with how teenagers act. Cece seems so sweet, but she just needs some space to become her own person. It can be uncomfortable talking to parents about boys, and I think as we get older, we forget that that's what it's like to be a teenager, and you played that perfectly here. And the horror of Cece seeing her parents make out was really so funny! I so loved how Pam was able to calm Jim down, she knows just how to handle him when he gets frazzled :) I love that they're still so in love with each other after all those years have passed. I'd love to read more of these, hopefully you'll feel inspired to do that soon!

Reviewer: TaioraWarrior Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2011 08:36 pm Title: Four years later...

I'm out here, er, there... somewhere. I liked this chapter just as much as the first. Write more of them! Maybe the next one could be about Philip?

Author's Response: Thanks! :) I'm working on something about Philip right now, actually-- only not with the PDA theme. Hopefully I can finish that soonish

Reviewer: gewitkow Signed [Report This]
Date: December 13, 2011 02:56 pm Title: Four years later...

Cute story!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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