Date: April 25, 2011 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm totally with you through the first five sections. I think we differ in the last portion of it. But I do still enjoy that we're hearing this all from Pam's point of view, that she did realize that she had feelings for Jim right from the get go yet tried to hide it. I can also see how this would lead up to the crushing "I'm totally over it" Jim line in The Secret. So, I think you've done well explaining her side of things, and it makes what he says in that episode all the more meaningful. The sixth section threw me off a bit, but I'm still looking forward to your continuation of this.
Date: April 21, 2011 10:38 am Title: Chapter 4
Happy Office Thursday, my dear little orphan spacey :D What a great way to celebrate! I love the way you tell a tale, the way the story slowly builds. The insight into Pam's slowly building feelings, that she candidly admits to thinking of Jim during sex with Roy, is fascinating. So enjoying this, my friend.
Date: April 21, 2011 09:28 am Title: Chapter 4
I don't know how you do it, but this is sooo great. The idea of Pam telling the story (before the story) is so new and it's addictive. I can't wait for the next segment. I know you will stretch this one out like you did with The Accident, but I don't mind a slow boil! On that note... Update soon! lol!