Date: May 10, 2011 06:54 am Title: Chapter 6
Well spacey, you've done it again... sucked me in to a WIP. You and A. Winslow better make good on your stories and complete them, cause I'm sucked into both of your stories. Try as I might, I'm so bored with having nothing to read, since nothing on here is complete.
This is really well written, just like your other story. Now, correct me if I'm wrong, but didn't you have another one listed, but with only one chapter? Have you removed that? I hope you finish it up and re-post.
I love reading "fill-in-the-blank" stories, since everyone has a different view of what happens when the cameras aren't there. Especially the beginning of the fun pranks on Dwight :)
10 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2011 11:18 am Title: Chapter 6
You're going to get tired of me telling you how great I think this is, but I'm loving this story. Your characterization is completely spot on, Dwight is perfectly Dwight and Jim is so definitely season 1-2 Jim. I can definitely see Michael being the one to come up with the documentary idea after seeing it on the internet, very true of Michael. I love how you're showing us how things started, not just between Jim and Pam's love for each other but also the pranking of Dwight and the Jell-o thing because he definitely says He put my things in Jello AGAIN, so very good there. I really am enjoying this, it seems so completely natural and very much a part of the show. Very excited for more of this story! I'm a big fan of finding out all of the little details of how things happened, not just what we saw on the show, but beyond it, and this story is giving so much depth to these two and their relationship.
Date: May 09, 2011 10:07 am Title: Chapter 6
SO! So happy you’re back with another mammoth chap! I don’t know how you do it, but I like it :D Your amazing details compliment cannon and make this read like an episode. I love your version of how the documentary came to be. Michael’s excitement over possibly being the subject of a documentary makes me smile as did the genesis of Pam and Jim becoming prank partners in crime. They just clicked from the start. So Pam Beesly, Mastermind, eh? Awesome! Who says that you don’t learn anything useful in school? ;) The fact that Roy was the original object of the pen prank is classic. Nice that she would share that info with Jim. Their dialog is spot on. Jim stopped with the phone long enough to take a look at the article, then gazed around the room. He saw what I did, everyone working quietly, nothing of any interest happening, just like every other day. It never occurred to us that we might be the interesting ones. Lucky us :)