Date: April 06, 2011 09:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Great idea! It has a nice flow to it when I read it! I can't wait to see where you're going to take this one! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, glad you're liking it!!
Date: April 06, 2011 09:01 am Title: Chapter 1
I was so happy to see another story from you. I love the background you gave us on everyone in the office. I am very excited for this series.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! Yeah, it was fun to see everything from the very beginning. Glad you're up for the series!
Date: April 06, 2011 08:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Spaceorphan, so glad you're back!!!! Great idea, great characterizations, fun story :) Reading about Pam's first day and her thoughts on her new co-workers is novel. I like that. I also couldn't help but think that even though Jim wasn't there yet, I could feel his presence between the lines. Nice job. Really happy that this is just the start of a series!
Author's Response: Thanks, Nan! So glad you're taking to it right from the beginning. :) Yeah, having Pam tell the story as an older Pam helps keep that Jim connection near the front. Thanks again!!