Date: August 08, 2011 07:39 pm Title: Overdue Update
I loved this story and am sad to see its end. But I liked that Pam got to give us the final update. It was nice to get her perspective on things and also the latest and greatest on the Halpert family.
Your end note was very sweet. I'm honored by the shout out. I also hope that you have another brilliant story brewing in your brain for me to review. I can't wait.
Date: August 05, 2011 12:08 pm Title: Overdue Update
I am sad to see this one come to an end but I love it. It was a nice surprise to have Pam jump in there with her side of things. I too hope you are coming up with some new ideas. I love your writing and can't wait for more.
Date: August 05, 2011 07:14 am Title: Overdue Update
Dedeen, you've just... this is beautiful. I am all teary eyed and smiling here. It was so great hearing Pam's perspective in this chapter. And pickles! I totally forgot about pickles! I love it. I really love this look into things from her side, how happy she is with Jim and how much she sees he loves his family. I'm so happy that little Ben is okay and crawling around the house, and that Cece became adjusted to everything. You've described this little family exactly the way I see them, and this story has been such a wonderful journey to read through. I hope you have something new in the works for us soon! Thank you for this, it was utterly beautiful. :) And your end note is so sweet, you're very welcome :)
Date: August 04, 2011 02:00 pm Title: Overdue Update
Well done, you. Dedeen, I hope you're proud of this. It's beautifully written and full of emotion. You include the good and the bad, which makes it so real. Lovely having Pam write the last chap.
I hope you're planning something new ;) /greedy