Reviews For Breathe
Reviewer: aurorabora Signed 
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Date: July 13, 2006 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 6
6 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2006 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 6
The pacing seems a little frantic, and some of the characterizations are a bit off, but overall it's a pretty good story. I hope you write again soon.