Date: January 05, 2018 11:23 pm Title: 'Cause there's beauty in the breakdown
I can't believe there's only one review! This is amazing! I, too, believe there is more than one kiss --- if you compare the two scenes, they are different! So this is fabulous!
He doesn’t mean to tell her that he’s wanted to do that for so long, but he can’t keep it in. His heart is soaring.
I love his heart soaring -- that's exactly what's on his face in this scene. That's exactly what grabbed my heart.
Great job on capturing the power of this scene watchthesky! Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Of all of my stories, this is the one Iím least confident in, so Iím especially glad to hear you like this one :-)
Date: July 14, 2016 11:15 pm Title: 'Cause there's beauty in the breakdown
Now sure how this has no reviews so I suppose I'll take the lead and add one! I'm a sucker for a good "what's going on in their heads during casino night" fic and this is great, the little parts you added are all very much in the spirit of that night. I know the JAM fic glory days are behind us but I still hope you'll consider writing some more as I've greatly enjoyed your fics! :-)
Author's Response: Thank you, lovely <3