Date: March 06, 2018 05:40 pm Title: You're the Only One I Want
So I’ve been seeing this on the featured stories section for a while and only just now got to read it. Wow! I’m glad I did. You wrote them both really well-their inner monologues/train of thought were in character and believable, the build up was excellent, and I do love a good smutty story! ;) I have loved what I’ve read of yours and look forward to reading more in the future!
Author's Response: Thank you for going back and reading and reviewing! These two are a bit of a hassle to keep in character, especially when there’s not a whole lot of dialogue, so I’m glad you liked this! Personally, I think build ups are a lot of fun :)
Date: July 26, 2017 10:11 am Title: You're the Only One I Want
Honestly, the sexual tension in this is EVERYTHING. It's such a long, perfect build up. With a nice reward. (; I REALLY love the ending, talking about all things wrong and forbidden and rebellious. I had always thought that something had happened between them in that episode, and this is a beautifully done story of what that something might have been.
Author's Response: I thought I was the only one who thought something might have happened between them in that episode! I almost didn't include the last part because I wasn't sure it would fit, so I'm very relieved to hear you like it :) Thank you!
Date: May 01, 2017 08:51 am Title: You're the Only One I Want
Very good! Sexy with a good premise. It's about time someone wrote on Dwight/Angela! Something different like a Pam/Michael or Ryan/Erin or Dwight/Angela is always appreciated. Keep it up
Author's Response: Thank you so much !! While I enjoy Jim/Pam, I feel like a lot of the other pairings deserve more attention. I really appreciate the review !!
Date: March 31, 2017 08:03 pm Title: You're the Only One I Want
So I'll be totally honest and admit that I don't really gravitate towards Dwangela fanfics BUT I am glad I read this because you did a fantastic job. Dwight is definitely one of the more difficult characters to write but you really captured his voice and thoughts. And your writing of how Angela sees and feels about Dwight, it's like I finally actually understand the attraction there. And you kept them in character during the smutty parts, another thing that's not easy to do! I hope you have more stories planned because I definitely would like to read more from you!
Thank you so much! You have no idea how much this means to me! This is seriously one of the nicest thing anyone has ever said about my writing! This was actually my first time writing Office fanfic (making this my first review!!), and I was worried I didn't accurately portray the characters, so this gave me some reassurance that I did okay! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it, and I'm definitely planning on writing more very soon!