Date: June 01, 2018 04:36 pm Title: The Beginning
I love this glimpse into what Pam is thinking. And i love how you wrote Pam, so much more assured than she comes across but without pushing to to a level that becomes believable. I love how she incorporated things she wrote in the emails into the letter. I had an idea a few days ago to do something similar a la “Dear Mr Henshaw” but now I don’t know if I can because you did this so well! Great job.
Date: October 22, 2017 09:00 am Title: The Beginning
Wonderful story and fantastic last chapter! :)
Date: September 14, 2017 01:40 pm Title: The Beginning
Oh, so good!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Happy you enjoyed it.
Date: September 07, 2017 08:02 pm Title: The Beginning
very well written!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: September 02, 2017 02:51 am Title: The Beginning
I love this one so much! And you should definitely write in this tone again because it really works. This last chapter had AMAZING dialogue in it between them, I have to say! I seriously can't wait to read whatever you're gonna post next :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I always look forward to hearing from you.
Date: September 01, 2017 07:16 pm Title: The Beginning
Great story! It was really well-written, and captivating from the beginning to end.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)