Date: December 31, 2017 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
To comfect: Oops! Didn't expect to get nailed on that. Well-done! I got lazy, and you caught me. Since you have also given me positive feedback, I respect your opinion. I can remove the bowl part without changing the story. Would you review it without the bowl part or like me, find that my blunder ruined the rest of the story.I have 19 stories on AO3. Hope you will read and critique them. Bravo!
Date: December 28, 2017 07:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Hey, thanks for contributing for the community! Just so you know, for me at least it was very immersion-breaking to have two supposed Cornell alumni talking about bowl games in the 90s as if the Ivy League played in bowl games. They don't, and haven't since the modern bowl game system evolved. That made it very hard to believe using that as a verifier of Cornell identity.