Date: May 27, 2018 03:38 pm Title: Prank
Stopping again because the way you talked about Pam’s heart made MY heart melt. Ugh. I love that stuff. Moving on to the next one!
Author's Response: Keep ‘em comin, sister! I am a review whore so feel free to leave one for every chapter if you like. 😉
1 [Report This]Date: March 18, 2018 08:27 pm Title: Prank
I love what you're doing here. Your style fits in really well with these moments we already know while deepening and developing them too.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
1 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2018 09:48 pm Title: Prank
“There's no kitten around on Halloween."
This exchange actually had me laughing longer than it probably should have but I could just so easily picture her “uh-huh, you see what I did there expression” and then him all “you are completely ridiculous but so freaking adorable”
And this... “Pam is torn between wanting her (best) friend to be happy and successful and wanting him to stay here. With her.”
So true, she (always) wanted what was best for him and I really don’t think jim saw it like that. He just understood it as another sign that she didn’t feel the same way for him as he did for her.
“Fixing” things in the bar, without proper discussion, by making plans to prank Dwight feels very right.
Author's Response: e “youre completely ridiculous but so freaking adorable” is exactly the look I had pictured in my head! I just got the season DVDs and have been binging and I’m so sad we didn’t get to see more of Pam’s awesome pun game in the show, because they’re all over the deleted scenes. I couldn’t help myself, had to throw some corny puns in there.
And yeah, I wanted a resolution without a resolution and I’m glad that came across. These two just don’t like to talk, so they?