1 [Report This]Date: December 01, 2020 03:31 pm Title: In Which a Game Begins and an Introduction is Made
I'm not sure if this is a remix/repurposing of Casino Night or foreshadowing, but either way, I like it.
The description of their immediate connection here is just very strong. And the metaphor of Michael as a hurricane is killer.
Author's Response: Always assume that there's at least a little bit of canon recycling in any place it looks like there is ;). Thank you! Hurricane Michael felt appropriate.
1 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2018 12:29 pm Title: In Which a Game Begins and an Introduction is Made
Oh my gosh, this has me laughing out loud. SO perfect. I love it. Write it forever, please.
Author's Response: At the current pace, I just might ;). Thank you very much, and I'll endeavour to keep it up.
1 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2018 10:59 am Title: In Which a Game Begins and an Introduction is Made
I’m forever impressed by your ability to carry Jim and Pam’s relationship throughout the various alternative universes you’ve created in this story and past stories alike. Your command of the language is entrancing to say the least, creating a tone of royalty whilst never losing the essence of their relationship. I guess there’s a reason you’re AOTM!
Author's Response: Why thank you very much. I hope you continue to think so as we progress through the story. There's a fine line between ornate language and losing the characters, and I'm glad to hear that so far I'm on the right side of it, here and elsewhere.