Date: August 10, 2019 09:26 pm Title: The One with the Fun and Games
It had been some time since I read this story. I was so excited to see an update! I went back and reread the whole thing before diving into this chapter. Woo-boy! It was as awesome the second time around! I say keep the chapters coming!
Date: August 07, 2019 05:29 am Title: The One with the Fun and Games
Fun, sexy, flirty, loving, sweet, romantic, and even a little dirty there too. I mean really pick an adjective and it would fit somewhere in this chapter. Even with all the sexiness, I can still see the deep bond they both share. That they're so comfortable and in love with each other they can play like this shows that connection. Great job.
Now if you'll excuse me, I think I need to take a cold shower before heading into work.
Date: June 04, 2019 08:36 pm Title: The One With the Snow Day Pt. 2
Obviously I love the sexy parts of this chapter - and it's a damn good chapter, but I was so delighted by this paragraph: "It was no use arguing. I tried plenty of times as she was getting dressed (definitely tried to steal her clothes. Definitely tried to undress her several times. Definitely got slapped), as she was brushing her teeth (kissed up and down her neck while standing behind her. Tried several times to cop a feel. Ended up with toothpaste in my hair), while she made us breakfast (plopped her down on the counter, snuck my hands under her shirt. She ate the last pancake in protest. Rude)"
Even their silent banter is perfect.
That's one way to make snow angels.
I really love that as their relationship gets stronger and more stable, they're getting comfortable enough with each other to be a little more daring - a little riskier - and that they're constantly checking in with each other to make sure things are okay before they get too far.
It's just such a healthy relationship and I'm so proud of them, okay?!
Date: June 04, 2019 07:54 pm Title: The One with Jimís Lilí Dainty Fingers
From beginning to end, I love this chapter. It's not just Ryan as a boy band reject or the post-Valentine's day lunch activities or even the Bathroom Scene. I love the great backstory we get from this chapter that correlates perfectly to canon. SO GOOD!! Thank you for this!
Date: May 31, 2019 06:04 am Title: The One with Jimís Lilí Dainty Fingers
I’ll be back with a full review (for both new chapters) soon but listen. This is important.
Seeing as how Jim is 6’3”, I think ‘dainty’ is subjective and probably best case scenario in times like this and no, I haven’t given this any thought at all, why would you even ask that?
This story is the best. Truly.
Date: May 30, 2019 10:50 pm Title: The One with Jimís Lilí Dainty Fingers
Story time. So I'm at work one night getting my ambulance all checked out. Making sure we have enough supplies on hand, the batteries are charged, so on and so forth. I hop in the cab to start up the computer when my partner calls forward to ask what size medical gloves I prefer. I say small and he tosses up a box. When he got in the drivers seat he gave me crap for wanting small gloves as I'm one of the few if only guy at the station that uses that size. My response; "My wife has no complaints," which quite effectively shut him up. So I'm 100% with Jim here.
In other regards it's also nice to see Jim and Pam out doing normal couple type things, even if they (he) literally can't keep their hands off each other (her). Ryan can go suck an egg of course. Great job as always.
Date: May 27, 2019 05:49 pm Title: The One Where Pam Second Guesses Her Own Decision
This was...amazing. So sexy and yet so sweet. I can totally imagine these two having this amazing physical relationship, while looking so sweet and vanilla at the office.
Date: May 26, 2019 04:36 pm Title: The One With the Snow Day Pt. 2
Oh stop hiding all the time. I mean I know you just got a computer again and all, but seriously. How many times have I and everyone else told you how great this story is. But of course you know that and I'm sure beyond all the calls for holy water you're back there smirking at how much fun you're having writing this.
Considering how long it's been since we've gotten an update (not blaming you there, just pointing out a fact) this more that makes up for the hiatus. Great job.
Date: January 29, 2019 02:03 pm Title: The One With the Snow Day: Pt. 1
Hi, I’ve got the humor of a 12 year old and I’m giggling like mad that I’m the 69th review of this story and that it happened on this chapter. Nice.
I don’t even know what to say, agian. Everything is Just. So. Good. You string words and phrases together in such a beautiful way that I didn’t even know was possible and you have consistently kept this entire story sexy and sweet at the same time and none of the chapters have fallen flat. I laughed at “you bet your balls they can” and then minutes later I was squealing over how perfect the line “it was my name on her lips on my cock” and I don’t know how you do it, but just don’t stop anytime soon, okay? Okay.
Really can’t wait for Part 2!
Date: January 27, 2019 07:04 pm Title: The One With the Snow Day: Pt. 1
This is not my official review, but this is me saying that I see you with Pam’s plate of pickles and Jim’s crackers and Swiss cheese. Well played.
You are the first person to say anything omg he subject, so kudos!
Date: January 25, 2019 07:41 pm Title: The One With the Snow Day: Pt. 1
My god. Not only is it hot and sexy and has these sweet moments, but it’s just so well-written.
“Like a tidal wave, it was suddenly crashing over me, a lit match sparking beneath my fingers” ugh; love it.
That whole “let’s do it” exchange was great.
I am so excited that this means there’s a Part Two! I hope Jim listened.
Date: January 24, 2019 05:07 am Title: The One With the Snow Day: Pt. 1
Now that's the way to kick off a snow day. There a few shots of Jim and Pam in late afternoon light in the show after they've gotten together. A lot of times in those shots Pam especially seems to be glowing. That's the image I gather was going on here. Them both softly lit up by firelight, while they play on the couch. Very sensual when one also thinks about everything else that was going on. Looking forward to seeing what they get up to during the rest of the snow day.
Date: January 07, 2019 04:10 pm Title: The One with the New Year's Fireworks
Pam sure has come a long way since chapter 1, hasn't she?
It's fine - no one ever actually pays attention to the PowerPoint presentations. Don't sweat it, Jim.
I really enjoy how sassy Pam is throughout this entire chapter... definitely laughed out loud at "The sky is blue. What's it to you?"
Date: January 07, 2019 04:03 pm Title: The One That's Merry and Bright
So, because you already know I think you're one of the best smut writers ever, I'm just going to assume that you know I enjoyed those parts of this chapter and instead, I'm gonna focus on the non-sexy details and things that I loved that stood out to me.
You know, like all of Jim's family giving Pam Bath and Body Works gifts. And Jim not knowing how to use chopsticks. The faded lipstick stain on his sweater that he didn't notice but she did. And that Jim stopped to grab cookies on the way to bed.
Seriously, please don't ever stop writing, okay?
Date: January 04, 2019 09:17 pm Title: The Thankful One
Lol, I loved that chapter, loved the dirty talk, but my favorite part was your chapter end notes :)
Author's Response: Haha, thank you! The end notes were my favorite and you’re the only one who has said something, lol
Date: January 01, 2019 02:33 pm Title: The One with the New Year's Fireworks
Now that's the way to welcome in the New Year. Who cares if there were fireworks in any given city, Jim and Pam had plenty of their own. Lots of fun to see all these holiday chapters for sure.