1 [Report This]Date: February 25, 2019 08:39 am Title: June 11: The Cafeteria
Right back at you, Halpert. I love it when Pam finds her voice and uses it :)
Author's Response: That's my favorite part of writing AU: I get to make Pam do that. Thanks for reviewing!
1 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2018 07:38 pm Title: June 11: The Cafeteria
I love the ever-growing ease and familiarity between Pam and Larissa as they continue to get know each other! The 2 golden lines in this chapter - Larissa asking her what her intentions were and Pam at the end saying she'd like to do the proposing -- those are gems!
Author's Response: Thank you! It's really good to hear which moments stand (or at least stood) out :)
Date: June 06, 2018 07:24 pm Title: June 11: The Cafeteria
I love this line: “and she wasn’t minding it one bit, except when he reminded her it was happening.” It’s maybe the most concise way that I’ve seen a writer describe that whole dynamic and it gets the point across without being too flowery or full or jargon or whatever. Idk, it just really stuck out to me as a lovely line. Great work as always, onto the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks. I like that one too, and it's nice to know my internal sense of what's going on in their relationship mirrors yours :).
1 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2018 07:34 pm Title: June 11: The Cafeteria
Lol! These two are going to have so much fun being sisters!
Author's Response: I can't imagine anyone not enjoying having Pam as a sister--I'm glad you think Pam would also enjoy my version of Larissa :-D
Date: June 05, 2018 03:05 pm Title: June 11: The Cafeteria
Omg this is great! I sure you've already thought about it, but it would be great to read a part where Pam talks to Jim whilst he's in the coma and then hear from his perspective in the coma (a dream or something)! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks! That is going to happen, and technically has happened if you look for her "I did" in his dream.