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Reviewer: Coley Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09, 2018 03:07 pm Title: June 13: The Note

I totally wasn’t thinking “just read the letter already, Pam!” through that first half. That’s just me being impatient though. I loved her powers of deduction.

And then she read it and it didn’t disappoint! Well done!

They’re so dang cute together in this. I’m going to miss this story when it’s done.

p.s. - hope the move went well 😊

Author's Response: Haha. I must admit, I had been setting up a lot of Jim the previous chapter so it didn't seem fair to make Pam jump right into the card. But I too was wondering when I'd get to it ;). Glad it didn't disappoint! And yes, the move went well, thanks.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 08, 2018 12:51 pm Title: June 13: The Note

That was very sweet. I can very easily see that what you've written here was what was written on the Teapot Card. It was interesting to see all of Pam's mental gymnastics leading up to reading it too. It's always interesting to see what's going on in their heads. I wish I had more jellybeans to give, but I'm all jellybean'ed out on this story.

Author's Response: Thanks! I've thought a lot about the card, so I'm really glad my version made sense to you. Thanks for your consistently valuable feedback on this story. 

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