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Reviewer: With_An_E Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2018 02:06 pm Title: Beneath the Sheets of Paper Lies My Truth

Oh Coley, I want more! Jim is so patient and sweet in this story and Pam is so cute. I love these kinds of stories. :)

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2018 07:25 am Title: Beneath the Sheets of Paper Lies My Truth

This remains amazing. Though kinda mad at Jim for not at least mentioning the person I assume is Karen. Gotta be honest bro.

Author's Response: Heh. I wondered if anyone would catch that! If it makes you feel any better, Karen’s attempts at flirting were very much one-sided and will be explored a little more in the next one. 

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2018 07:17 am Title: Beneath the Sheets of Paper Lies My Truth

I love this so much. I love Pam’s boldness—she could have used a lot more of that a lot earlier—I love Jim’s hesitation and his thought process and just everything. And girl you better believe I’m ready for the third date!

Reviewer: SprinklesTheCat Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2018 06:29 am Title: Beneath the Sheets of Paper Lies My Truth

This is so great! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: BecauseOfYou Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2018 08:12 pm Title: Suppose You Never Ever Called

Oh very fun... excellent work here! Definitely excited for this one, I hope you write fast!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2018 11:44 am Title: Suppose You Never Ever Called

That's a very interesting take. I went to Netflix right after reading this and re-watched their phone conversation. I feel this fic kept the feel of that conversation. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: BigTuna Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2018 07:19 pm Title: Suppose You Never Ever Called

First thing, when I saw the title I *immediately* started singing that song. Good pick!

Second, this is such a great start and such an interesting take on territory that I feel like we’ve all taken a stab at. I’m excited to actually see Danny in a fic and I’m excited to see what Jim has to say about their date. I thought it was so sweet how they were hesitantly honest with each other but not just word vomiting everything, and the end! The lingering kiss! That was a great detail. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: SprinklesTheCat Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2018 02:17 pm Title: Suppose You Never Ever Called

Please keep writing this! I'm brand new to The Office too and just slightly addicted.

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2018 05:37 am Title: Suppose You Never Ever Called

I really expected this to be a one shot so I'm very excited it isn't. More please!

Reviewer: alittlestitious2 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06, 2018 01:18 am Title: Suppose You Never Ever Called

I trust you wholeheartedly! Urgh I just love this! The conversational language is so spot on its like a writer from the actual show wrote it! Congratulations! I will definitely stay tuned 😊

Reviewer: Clover Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2018 10:19 pm Title: Suppose You Never Ever Called

Oh Coley, this is pretty darn exquisite. I'm too sleepy to write anything intelligent, but you surprise me at every turn, which is my most favorite feature of amazing writing! Please keep surprising me. I just want to hug them both! But that would be weird.

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2018 09:45 pm Title: Suppose You Never Ever Called

“Shh. Still lingering.”

I think I live-freaked to you enough, but I truly do need you to never stop writing. This is so perfect.

Reviewer: BringingTheJam Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2018 09:21 pm Title: Suppose You Never Ever Called

Okay, I LOVE this story already! What a clever concept!

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