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Reviewer: SprinklesTheCat Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2020 07:04 am Title: What It Looks Like

This one did not get enough reviews! Great story to have unfold from Michael's comment. Jim is so sweet with her and so sexy.

Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2020 04:25 am Title: What It Looks Like

Oh my god, BT. Way to take that Michael comment and run with it. I laughed so much at Pam explaining that particular interaction to Jim. I love that you made it even more embarrassing with the server. And then for good measure you threw in this particularly delightful line: “Ew. Don’t say his name in my bedroom.” and I laughed some more.
Then this got all kinds of smutty and sweet, and I just adore the way you write these two dorks. It’s so, so great.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Jenna! This one is a fun one for sure, I love the early days of their relationship when there are still new ways to experience each other. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: DoctorCinderella Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 10, 2018 03:58 pm Title: What It Looks Like

Wow. Oh my. I need a cold drink now. Maybe my own tall glass of sun tea. 😂

Seriously, this was so nicely done and in character. Jim’s confidence and him saying it comes from how Pam makes him feel was just so sweet and in character for him. That combo of sort of directing Pam and asking permission? Yeah that was amazing. And there’s Classic Pam being hesitant and cautious before Jim helps her break out of her that. Great story all around!

Reviewer: WishYouWould Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 29, 2018 12:29 pm Title: What It Looks Like

Wow. Just...oof. Incredible.
I agree about needing a pocket Jim.
My favorite thing in the world is watching my husband take his shirt off (haha), so I am right there with Pam.
And the way you made Jim the perfect combination of dirty and sweet— so in character. Bossy, but asking permission before he undressed her.
I’m on a rampage through your stuff today, clearly. So expect more of these! ;)

Reviewer: agian18 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2018 11:21 am Title: What It Looks Like

I know this is supposed to be all hot and steamy and “they literally just screwed in front of a mirror,” but like, Pam getting excited that Jim used her key had me cryin’.
Also, where can *I* get a pocket sized Jim-who-strips-as-soon-as-he-walks-in-my-house because, necessary~
The little “can I?” killed me. Literally trying to convince his girlfriend to watch them have sex in the bedroom mirror, but also being polite. Ugh. I love good boyfriend Jim.
And the actually “doin’ it in front of a mirror” was fantastic. Oh my god. You go, girl. I love how Pam flipped on a dime at the end. Like, damn. You do realize that you TOTALLY left it open for more at the end, right? 😉

Author's Response: Thank you so much! And yes, pocket Jim is 100% necessary, for all of us. If only, right? And it's so funny to me that you and Coley both brought up continuing things, because while that wasn't my plan initially it sure is tempting...

Reviewer: Coley Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2018 08:01 am Title: What It Looks Like


First of all, love Jim just casually stripping his way through Pam’s apartment. I wouldn’t have been able to get any homework done either.

That. Wink. It killed me. That was good.

This whole idea is so great. Pam’s insecurities and Jim’s confidence in her were both so in character and the dialogue was true.

Pam’s increasing feistiness along the way and Jim’s continued streak of being the sexiest boyfriend alive made this so much fun to read! It wouldn’t be the worst thing in the world if there was a part two. In front of that bathroom mirror. ;)

Author's Response: Right? I have to give credit to the stripping through the house to my husband, who (fortunately for me) does that often. Art imitates life, amiright? You and AG both brought up continuing things and I didn't even realize I left it open ended. It was in my head as just a one shot, but I have to admit to having a few plot bunnies now. We might definitely see a part two!

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