Date: July 05, 2018 08:33 pm Title: Boyfriends and French Onion Chips
I LOVE the line about Pam and Roy being held together by string, duct tape and obligation. Stupid Roy.
I also really liked the guys bonding over alcohol and their trying to help Jim with what to do - you don't see that a lot and it was definitely a nice touch!
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: July 05, 2018 03:02 pm Title: Boyfriends and French Onion Chips
Dumb old Roy, always keeping them apart when they’re obviously meant to be together! But conflict is important and I’m looking forward to where you take it. Also, I can’t WAIT to read about the Halloween party! Loving this so far, can’t wait for more!
Date: July 01, 2018 11:29 am Title: Farming and Walruses
Aw! This was so cute. The text at the end was adorable. You wrote them all really well and in character, too, I could easily picture the entire chapter. I can’t wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you're liking it!
Date: June 28, 2018 12:10 pm Title: Farming and Walruses
It must be exhausting having Kelly for a roommate! Except for when she invites cute boys over, that is.
This was fun to read! I always like a good AU and that text at the end was super adorable. Can’t wait to read more 😊
Author's Response: I know, right? But I thought it would be fun to write for Kelly, and it is! I'm really glad you're already enjoying this. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: June 28, 2018 12:00 pm Title: Farming and Walruses
I’m in need of more “Jim and Pam meet when they’re younger stories.” Great start! I loved the little text at the end. So cute!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was a little scared to be writing an AU like this, but this is super reassuring :)
Date: June 28, 2018 11:58 am Title: Farming and Walruses
Very cute. Lots of fun playful banter between everyone here. There was only one thing that was kind of distracting. The "(read: literally make out)" part when everyone is leaving the dorm. If that's what you're trying to get across, then just say that. Like I said it was a little distracting, for me, to read it like that.
Otherwise, very fun. Keep going with this.
Author's Response: Well first off, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Second, thanks for pointing that out! I went back and read it myself after I saw your review and I can totally see what you mean. I'll make sure to be more careful moving forward. Thanks!