Reviews For A Knock at the Door
Reviewer: Duchess Cupcake Signed 
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Date: August 31, 2018 05:12 am Title: Chapter 1
1 [Report This]Date: August 31, 2018 05:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Nicely done. You did a great job describing Pam’s jealousy in the beginning. Doorway confessions are wonderful and you did a great job with that dialogue. Good for Pam setting her boundaries! I hope you keep writing.
Reviewer: With_An_E Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2018 10:21 am Title: Chapter 1
1 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2018 10:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw that’s very sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2018 05:28 am Title: Chapter 1
1 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2018 05:28 am Title: Chapter 1
A good start. Nice buildup, a bit of a rush at the end, but great emotional beats.
Author's Response: Thanks! Appreciate the feedback. I don't really write at all so this is new to me haha
Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2018 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
1 [Report This]Date: August 02, 2018 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good job for your first fic. You conveyed their emotions very well and the ending was very sweet. Keep it up.
Author's Response: Thank you!