Reviews For Water's Edge
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Reviewer: jamtogether Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: December 05, 2018 12:45 pm Title: High Time

It's what I wanted to see also. Great story. Can you write more?

Reviewer: Merria Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2018 11:42 am Title: High Time

This was very cute. Nice job. Love the fluffiness. Hope you post something new soon

Author's Response: Thank you Merria!  This just came to me.  If another one comes to me, I will post it too.  Thanks for your encouragement!  :)

Reviewer: BecauseOfYou Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2018 02:15 pm Title: High Time

I really enjoyed this! On the show I really respect Pam so much more for not telling Jim everything she needs to say while he’s still with Karen.
But in fic I love reading it and this was done perfectly. She was strong, confident, brave, and honest and still asking for nothing in return. And of course she ended up getting everything anyway.

Author's Response:

Wow!  What a wonderful review Because!  What I really like about Jim and Pam is how kind and respectful they are, really to everyone, but especially with each other.  Even with Dwight and Michael, when they are hurting, they are both there for them. 

On the show, I really expected that once she started her speech at the beach, that she wouldn't be able to keep it in any longer.  But she wouldn't say it ALL in front of Karen.  So the water's edge was the perfect place to finish her confession. 

I like the way you think BecauseOfYou!  :) 

Reviewer: WishYouWould Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2018 08:54 am Title: High Time

This was very cute! And well done, especially for your first story! I’m hoping you continue writing (not necessarily for this prompt, although that would be nice too!) good job :)

Author's Response: WYW, thank you!  Thank you for your kind encouragement!  High praise indeed, coming from you and Warrior!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2018 06:26 am Title: High Time

Very sweet indeed. Good job for your first story. I liked it.

Author's Response: Thanks Warrior!  And you are my very first review!  Glad you liked it.  Wow, it feels good to get a review --- I'll be sure to review more often now; getting feedback is great!

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