Date: October 05, 2018 12:31 pm Title: The story of us.
Kind of hard to tell how I feel about this one. It's very angsty up until the last couple sentences then all of a sudden it turns around. I get this is Jim's internal thoughts, but it seems a little disjointed.
Not to say it's not an honest peak into Jim's head, because it clearly is and that part you did well.