1 [Report This]Date: July 20, 2022 10:55 am Title: Chapter 3
Seeing you make a surprise reappearance to our little kingdom inspired me to check out some of your works beginning with this which I am enjoying. To backtrack a bit - the concept - fun - thought it would be scary but I’m enjoying the angle. The mention of checking out all the movies/shows on the subject- spot on and exactly what I would do. Which leads me to the refusal to take the pain meds. Got to hand it to Jim. Personal bit- when during my pregnancy I got a tooth infection and had a root canal and then had the tooth pulled I too tried to not take the pain meds. Lasted about 3 hours before I did -(ps.. kid came out fine, grown up now and pretty awesome). So bravo for Jim and Pam too for making him a dinner that could instigate the gag reflex.
Your writing style and descriptions are so well done.
Looking forward to reading the rest and more of your work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, it's always a privilege to hear that my writing is appreciated! Even the old writing 😍 I am trying really hard to motivate myself to finish and publish some of the stuff on my hard drive. Even if only self publishing. I will definitely keep the community in the loop if that happens. Motivation is fucky, god knows.
1 [Report This]Date: November 02, 2018 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
That whole paragraph that starts with "Pam didn't fuss..." is absolute perfection. That really captures who they are here and in canon.
Your description of the transition is gripping and I'm sympathetic to it, rather than scared of it. Well done!
1 [Report This]Date: October 26, 2018 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 3
Holy crap, your description of Jim's transition is amazing here. Poor guy, he wins all the Dad Dundies for not taking his pain meds.