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Reviewer: Coley Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2019 07:20 am Title: Union

Comfect, I just... want to punch him in the face. That's all. I don't even feel bad for him and his backwards way of thinking, I want him to stop thinking he's the boss of Pammy. And I want to punch him.

Author's Response: Tell me how you really feel. Also, I'm very worried about how easy Roy is to write given your violent reaction to him. What does this say about me?

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14, 2019 11:12 am Title: Union

Wow, Roy actually got a few more of the pieces put together here. Not all of them mind you, but more. Of course he's still an insensitive jerk. I mean if he's noticed since high school that Pam's been interested in art, and now wants to pursue that it shows that he's only in the relationship for what he can get out of it, not what he can do for Pam.

Again he thinks he's noticing things, but he's not really. Pam's still his girlfriend, not fiance. He's more worried about how he is perceived and that he's getting a raw deal than what Pam thinks or wants. That the fact that he can't even fathom that Pam might leave him shows just how unobservant he truly is. Well done for again being able to get all that out.

Author's Response: Thank you! It's interesting (though disturbing) to occupy that Roy headspace each time: trying to weigh exactly what he'd notice versus what deeper subtleties he can't even realize he's not realizing. Thanks for reading!

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