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Reviewer: Coley Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2019 08:11 am Title: After

Damnit Roy, you couldn't even cancel the food like you were supposed to. Give me the 2x4, I'll handle this for Pam.

"Because even now he won’t actually hear her tell it to him. He thinks he’s being considerate and attentive, but he’s really just being an attention hog. And she hates it. Almost as much as she hates not being able to look over and roll her eyes with Jim whenever it happens. But…not quite." I'm so glad Pam is recognizing Roy's selfishness for what it is, but I hate that she can't get a clean break from him.

Author's Response: If I could have given her a clean break, I would. But...canon. Sorry. I tried by making her notice it, even if I can't make her get rid of him yet entirely...

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2019 05:28 am Title: After

Double update! Whoo! Okay now that's out of the way cause this chapter isn't really a "whoo-hoo" moment. Sometimes Pam is to nice for her own good and that's what I get here. Don't get me wrong I completely understand. The line "once you've kicked a puppy you don't feel comfortable coming at it with a 2x4," sums that up great. Given they still work in the same building it's clearly impossible that she and Roy would not see each other, but his insistence on showing up all the time would obviously make that harder, thus triggering all that we see here with Pam.

I think you're right there at the end. Roy is trying to save face, both with himself and with others. He knows he royally screwed up and he's trying to get everyone to see that so they'll pressure Pam to take him back. It might look like he's changed, but the way you have it, he's still the selfish guy he was before. Good on Pam for seeing that, even if no one else will.

Author's Response: Yeah, I figured I'd miss a day (see: yesterday) so I needed the double to tide the story over. And yeah, this is definitely the dynamic I see with both Pam (not kicking the puppy enough) and Roy (still being selfish). I'm delighted that the story I'm trying to tell is coming across so clearly for you; thanks for the consistent reviews, they really help keep me on track.

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