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Reviewer: Coley Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28, 2019 08:14 am Title: Shirt

Oh look, he still thinks everything Pam does should relate directly to or be about him.

Suck it, Roy.

This story is taking me on a roller coaster of emotions; that's all I know.

Author's Response: I hope it's a fun rollercoaster, not one of those awful gut-churny ones (or those boring sedate ones, though we don't tend to call those rollercoasters). And yes, Roy is very solipsistic. The ass.

Reviewer: Kuri333 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2019 11:08 am Title: Shirt

Argh Roy! Get a move on, you big oaf.

But, yeah, I can see where he's coming from. And how he's not really fast keeping up.

Strange how he realises about all those things he didn't really noticed before, only he did, but they weren't important in his life.

Anyways, sorry about the rambling. Great update!

Author's Response: I mean, this is Roy, sadly. He's always out of sync with Pam in time, lagging behind her. I feel sorry for hum...but only so sorry. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2019 10:59 am Title: Shirt

Where was all this attention when you were together Roy? Oh that's right, you were to focused on yourself and just coasting to truly realize how great Pam was. Now all of a sudden that she's new and interesting but more importantly not with you, do yo finally notice.

Okay, now that's all out of the way. Roy's thought process is interesting here. Clearly he's not over her, and won't be for a long time. I like how you basically still have him in denial. All the lines that he's lying to himself that this is just a fight and she'll come back to him. I get the guy is hurting. However it looks like he's finally starting to see some of the why's of the breakup and that he had a much larger part to play than he might have first admitted. Always a pleasure reading this one.

Author's Response: As I mentioned a few updates ago, I think,  I am a little worried that my Roy seems so convincing, but I'm glad the thought processes here are sufficiently believable. Thanks!

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