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Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26, 2019 11:15 am Title: Conventional

Also, another quick note (hey double review too!) the starting form is Charmander, then evolving to Charmeleon, then finally evolving to Charizard. I'd say I'd stop nerding out with that, but it's probably not going to happen.

Author's Response: Nice catch. This is Jim's subconscious at work--he wants to think of himself going from starter on up but...be honest. Is Stamford Jim really a more evolved Pokemon than Scranton Jim (my answer? only if it's like a Kakuna).

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26, 2019 10:58 am Title: Conventional

Thanks for the shout out at the end there. Here I am sitting in my chair happily reading, while my wife and her best friend are talking about Oreo's and the pack of "Most Stuffing Ever" currently on our counter prior to starting their D&D game, and then they just look over at me like I'm crazy due to me laughing at my computer. Good times.

Anyway I digress. Yes, angsty here, but also you can see Jim's thought process. From his viewpoint, Pam hasn't reached out to him. She's going out on dates, not with him, even though she's free of Roy. She's moving on. So it makes sense that why shouldn't he as well. The Pokemon reference was a nice little spot of fun there to break things up too. Who would have thought when he said he was evolving he was thinking of Charizard?

Author's Response:

Sounds like a pretty good Saturday :). Glad to contribute with the laughing.

And I like taking the words from the show (like evolving) and trying to find new spins on how the characters might be imagining them... 

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