Date: January 28, 2019 12:13 pm Title: Jagermeister
Oh Drunk Jim. Even now you still can't stop over analyzing things. But it also makes sense that Drunk Jim would have his thoughts ramble on like this. A return to form that Sober Jim would have probably thought he's evolved past.
Even though he's drunk, alone, and confused, the way you have his drunk ramblings is actually pretty funny at times. The D&D references, the constitution of a Yak lightened up the angst a bit to have those in there.
Author's Response: I very deliberately did this as pure stream of consciousness with minimal editing for grammar to get that sense of rambling drunkenness, glad it appealed. And I did hope those things would help lighten the mood a little, so I'm glad to hear they did!
Date: January 28, 2019 11:49 am Title: Jagermeister
19 episodes are a sh*tload of episodes!!! Sorry, sorry, ehem. I'm cool. Except, not really.
What if he had answered, though?
Author's Response:
That's true, but there won't be a chapter for each necessarily, so it'll be sooner than you think.
And if he had? If I were going AU with this? She'd have answered back. And then they'd have gotten into texting each other. And then maybe The Merger wouldn't be such a cluster****.