Date: January 29, 2019 09:40 am Title: Giant
Well, this Roy surprised me. I actually wanted to hug him and tell him it's going to be ok, but then I realised it's Roy and... gah!
I really like the way he notices Pam in this one... ans hiw he didn't think of Jim at the end. Great update!
Author's Response: I considered having him think of Jim, but then decided it didn't work with where I wanted this to go. I'm glad you found him actually sympathetic until you remembered who he was (and he did too). Thanks for reading!
Date: January 29, 2019 09:10 am Title: Giant
At first it looked like Roy was starting to turn a corner here. That he was starting to think more about Pam than he was himself, but then there at the end, no. Since Scranton is staying open, he still doesn't really have a reason to change. Almost there but not quite.
However it also looks like he's doing some deeper introspection. Looking at ways that he caused the relationship to falter. That he relied on her to much. He's still pretty self absorbed, but this time it felt a little more rounded off.
Author's Response: Starting to turn? Probably. Turned? I don't think he can really have turned a corner if I'm going to properly build up to "Cocktails." But he's definitely...changing (even though I think he hates that word).