Date: January 30, 2019 10:35 am Title: The Merger: A Triptych
Oooh come on! (With the voice of Andy in that intro with the square bouncing on the monitor)
I know, I know, yoy did what you had to do but this chapter... oh how I hate it, and how a hate Jim above all and how I wish Pam would just grab him and tell him to stop being an ass.
Ehm... ok. Enough ranting. Super work, as usual!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am sorry in advance for the upcoming angst.
Date: January 30, 2019 09:49 am Title: The Merger: A Triptych
Good job with all three here. Jim still feeling confused, hurt, and tortured by all the memories seems to makes sense. Yet there's still that ever so slight tendril that says his heart still belongs to Pam. Having him have his monitor angles so he can see her was a great way to get that across.
Roy is, well, Roy.
I do feel for Pam here. Her confused feelings also make a lot of sense. The un-returned email and text, the fact the last time she saw Jim he was saying he loved her and now she's getting the cold shoulder. Still some good points I liked her completely seeing through what Roy is up to, nice touch there. Then her final thought. It may taken her a while, and yes there's still more angst to come, but that she can at least admit her real feelings to herself shows that she is growing and moving forward.
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate your detailed thoughts (especially the ones on Roy).