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Reviewer: SprinklesTheCat Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2019 08:50 pm Title: Galaxies

"His eyes had been speaking to her even more than his words had, and they invited her to fall in." Swoon. What a beautiful description.

Author's Response: Thanks! I enjoyed writing it, so I'm glad it was swoonworthy on your end :)

Reviewer: Kuri333 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07, 2019 04:53 am Title: Galaxies

I loved the whole parragraph about what part of the body Roy uses to think. Such clever sentences!

And yeah, the first time I saw this ep, I remember thnking after the punch that this was it. That now Jim and Pam HAD to get closer. But he behaved like a complete and utter assh*le

Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoyed writing that one. And yeah...I had the same thought and then they just made him a total dick there. Which is somewhat in line with the joyous surprise of The Job but still...

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2019 08:51 pm Title: Galaxies

I get where you say this is around the low point in their relationship. A lot of anger simmering here on both their parts. Yes Jim is being an ass. He probably feels justified in his actions, but he's still being an ass. Gotta feel for Pam though. All the stuff bouncing around in her head like this. I get the feeling it's going to stay like that until it all just boils over at the beach. And then we all know how that ends up. Great job as always. Looking forward to seeing the upswing now.

Author's Response: Thanks! The upswing is kinda short, but I'm hoping to do it justice. 

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