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Reviewer: Kuri333 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2019 12:59 pm Title: Jimpression

No. I need that 4x2 to run Jim over. 3 times. To make sure I did a good job.

Author's Response: Hopefully you won't feel that way after the next 2 chapters! But I'm glad you're experiencing these chapters strongly, as I am when writing them.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 08, 2019 12:15 pm Title: Jimpression

I like Pam's thought process here. That she's ready to accept either simple friendship or more than that so to say. Fancy New Beesly has come into her own here and it's good to see. She's getting rid of doubts and insecurities. It's been a long road but I'm glad to see it. You've done a great job getting her here. I'm going to assume that the next chapter with "Beach Games" will be a Jim notices Pam chapter. Really looking forward to seeing that one especially now that Pam is where she is.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, that was a good guess (hope you like it). And yeah, I think at this point Pam definitely wants at least to be friends with Jim--and I think it's important for her character development that she's comfortable enough with herself to accept just that if it's all she can get.

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