Date: March 25, 2023 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great job! You packed a lot in a few words.
Author's Response: Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.
1 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2020 11:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Man, that ending line is gorgeous. Very good execution of a 55-worder.
Author's Response: Thanks. It's surprisingly hard to write such a short story. Glad you liked it.
1 [Report This]Date: June 25, 2019 10:19 am Title: Chapter 1
55 words that just shot me through the heart. Beautiful, warrior!
Author's Response: Thanks CD. It was a fun challenge. Glad you liked it.
1 [Report This]Date: March 16, 2019 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my heart. You conveyed so much emotion in so little words. I would say you’ve definitely proven you can master the short chapter/story too!
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words. It's a challenge to be sure but fun.
1 [Report This]Date: March 16, 2019 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved loved loved it! Perfectly cut!
Author's Response: Thank you. The initial writing was a bit longer than 55 words so it was a bit of a challenge to figure out what to save and what to keep.